fist time lv

[kiillzonezero]

hi thier id id what the forms said and i reply two threads an im ready to start mine own any way hi thier glade to be here ive made 1st lv bout 3 days ago got it pretty good now ready for people to play its an underwater lv now thier are a few bugs i have and one of them is at the end of the lv i want to put a monster to attack the players and they have to run away my only problem is idkhow to make him do it becuse he gose way too fast anyway heres the info

the lv name is underwater challenge

psn name is killzonezero

well have have fun and pllease coment and heart if you want to but all critasm is welcome

[Serenade]

Hehe, not to be fussy or anything, but I think commas, fullstops, and the enter key go a long way to add to readability. Spelling and not shortening every second word helps too. !!

I played your level, and I found it fun at first, but I have to admit it was a bit long. I consider myself to be an easily distracted person, and yeah I have to admit that by the maze, I had been doing the same thing for long enough that I was getting bored.

Other then that it was fine, I think if it was just a little shorter it would be better. Also that jellyfish was kinda cool, maybe you should have put some more around the level, to vary things a bit.

(PS. I think you need to post the name of the two people you replied to? I am not sure, because I am new here! )

[Mrgenji]

Hi there, I did what the forum said and I replied to two threads. Now I'm ready to start one of my own.

Anyway glad to be here! I made my 1st level about 3 days ago and I've gotten it to a good enough level for people to play. It's an underwater level, but there are a few bugs I know about:

One of them is at the end of the level I wanted to put a monster that would attack the players, then they would have to run away from it. My only problem though is that I don't know how to make him do it! He always goes way too fast!

Anyway here's the info:

Title: Underwater challenge

PSN: Killzonezero

Well have have fun, please comment and heart if you want - but all criticism is welcome

sorry, couldn't resist

I'll be sure to give it a go later

[kiillzonezero]

thanks guys for the input ill take it in. i understand about the grammer just when you got a 6 month old baby on your lap trying to get the keyboard.
trust me its not fun. and i do agree that the lv is too long and thank you for the jellyfish im quite proud of it. and im going to adress the problems when i get home tonight.

[Mrgenji]

by the way you only provided feedback on one level. Not two.

[Serenade]

thanks guys for the input ill take it in. i understand about the grammer just when you got a 6 month old baby on your lap trying to get the keyboard.
trust me its not fun. and i do agree that the lv is too long and thank you for the jellyfish im quite proud of it. and im going to adress the problems when i get home tonight.

That's cool, look forward to seeing your future levels.

[Pinchanzee]

Would you be able to edit in the details of your QPQ (feedback) into your first post?

[Mrgenji]

Closed due to lack of QPQ. If you contact either myself of another mod with your QPQ we'll be happy to reopen it for you.