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    Default Uhhhhh5's Reviews...Uhhhhh...

    Ok well i just thought i might make a review...i hav'nt been on in a while now but still...i wana get into the review buisness, this is the way that im gonna do things ,all in a measly 5 section count!
    Section One:The Picture, The Title, And the Description
    Ok this section is all about the picture, the title, and the description...
    if ya couldn't figure it out, the picture is the little button you press to actually find out more about the level, i will say how it makes me feel(scared, excited, happy, ect.) and if it wanted me to press it and play the level.
    The title shoudn't be something like "My First Level" or "H4H, CLICK HERE NOW FOR TACO'S!", i will give a 1/10 rating for those types...for 10/10, i would've wanted to see something more like "Grasshoper's War Of the Dirt" or "SpiderMan And The Green Goblin"(LOL), those are the title's im looking for....
    and finally, the description, it should be about 3 - Max. Amount, sentances, should not be talking about something other than the LEVEL... if the lines would be something like --------------------- , i will accept that...
    Now that we've talked about that, lets go on to the next section!

    Section 2:The Entry
    Well, if i jump into a level, and i see dark matter, im on the actuall ground, or if it's just...common, the entry rating won't be that good, if you've ever seen a level with Super titles in the entry such as "Crazeman223 Presents:Spiderman and the Green Goblin" and then i drop into the actuall story, i would give that a ten, but it wont be the only way to get a ten...

    Section 3:The Plot and The Setting
    Ok, if you didn't know wat plot means, it basicly means the storyline/ the problem, and setting means the area where you are at...SO, if i only see 1 problem in the story, i'd give it only a 6, but if it had at least 2, it's a good 8...Now for the setting, where do you want me to feel, in outer space, in the desert, on the beach, wherever, if you make me feel like im in the are where you want me to be(this also connects with the title/description/picture)the it's a 10....

    Section 4:Glitches
    Now this section is the hardest section for you to bear, the glitch/problem section, will i fall into a hole and never get out on accident, maybe, will i get caught in a glitch on accident, maybe, or will i just get stuck? MAYBE...if it has more than 5 glitches that harm my chances of getting a good rating on the scoreboard, this section drops down to a 5 automaticly...but if it is just a glitch that you can't really get anything bad on, such as in the anti-gravity box glitch or the go through walls glitch, that wont really do anything bad to this section...

    Section 5:The Ending
    This is the part of the story making me want more, more i tell you more!, in the level LittleBigDeadSpace, when it ended, i was like...is this the ending, i hope nothing comes out to scare me, and when nothing does, i feel relieved, and then 5 seconds later, something scares me! i get freaked out, and i went to part 2 automaticly,it was that good...

    *EDIT*
    Section 6:Extra Notes
    This is the section for orginality, difficulty, lights, ect....not much here in this section for now...



    See, was that so difficult?...Well i still don't care...

    Ok, the sections that won't count in race levels, survival levels, or anything else such as tutorials...
    Section 3
    Yep...only that one section

    *EDIT*
    Im now making new mini-reviews, these are reviews...that only has 1 section, here i go
    Section 1
    Just comments about the level, some pointers, then the total score...

    Only 5 poeple at the waiting list tops!goes for normal reviews, and mini-reviews...

    Waiting List
    Konnik (Mini Review)
    DRLONG
    Goldy5000


    Now go on...START ASKING!

    *EDIT*
    You must at least wait a week for you're review, i have a lot of things to do here also

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    Just a suggestion, If you are going to review levels, try summarizing your levels making it easier to read and not so drawn out.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SuicidalSquirrel View Post
    Just a suggestion, If you are going to review levels, try summarizing your levels making it easier to read and not so drawn out.
    Okedokey.............
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    Glad i could be of service

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    Ok so im gonna go play WillGuitarGuy's level "Techno Drop", ill review it as practice....cya in 10 poeplez!
    Quote Originally Posted by Sackman View Post
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    Hidy Ho! If you're itching for a level to review, you could review my level LBL#4-A Dark Fate for LittleBigLand. I have never requested a review for that level, so it will be interesting to see what you think of it. If you hate reading/RPG-adventure levels, then you might just want to not review it though, because it is a bit heavy on the text

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    Hey Sackman.
    Nice to see you opened up for business.
    I'd like you to review my Frightfest entry, if you could
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    Hehehe....
    I'm going to give you some work...
    You can review MY frightfest entry!

    It's also heavy on text and can be glitched but don't try to >.> lol.
    Nice that you started reviewing!

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    g00d lU<k

    I love all of you guys! <3

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    Ok Ok, im not going to do the reviews until tomorow, i might squeeze some in today...
    Quote Originally Posted by Sackman View Post
    My name is Artemiy...not gonna say last name...
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    Hey can you review my Dirtbike Challenge level, i've had Konnik review it, but i just want a few more pointers on where i can polish it

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