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    Default Blue Heaven Guild story series

    Hi all. Thought I would post of my story series. Easiest way to find it is of course via my psn Laharlsama. So far I have three installments. The first is a short prologue that establishes basic gimmicks for my series. I don't repeat explainations in proceeding stages really so it is advised you start at the prologue.

    Please give any comments and feedback you see fit. I am sure I can improve a lot but without feedback I cant know. Oh, also, the stages are built for one player so....yeah...anyway the stages are...

    Blue Heaven Guild Prologue
    Blue Heaven Guild Ch. 1 Rest
    Blue Heaven Guild Ch. 2 The Warped Manor

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    just posting to see if anyone has had a chance to play though any of my stages yet. could really use some useful comments and feedback if anyone has.

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    Try not to double post. I will look at your levels tonight when I get the chance. Perhaps you could give us a little more detail about your level?

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    I asked in advance before I double posted so no worries there.

    Hmm...felt the first message gave a lot but ok. The story follows Retin. He is a member of a guild who is assigned the mission of rescuing the mayor's daughter, Alexia, who had been kidnapped by a vampire.

    That is really as much detail as I can give without stepping on the stories toes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Laharlsama View Post
    I asked in advance before I double posted so no worries there.

    Hmm...felt the first message gave a lot but ok. The story follows Retin. He is a member of a guild who is assigned the mission of rescuing the mayor's daughter, Alexia, who had been kidnapped by a vampire.

    That is really as much detail as I can give without stepping on the stories toes.
    oh ok. You could have just edited your first post and wrote "EDIT:" though.
    THanks for a little more insight to the level, I'll play it when I get on.

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    I found some free time and played all 3 of your Blue Heaven Guild levels.

    So here is a small review!

    The Prologue: The prologue was alright. I didn't find anything I really found special in it. I did like the small monster training though. That red light vulnerability thing is a great idea!


    Chapter 1: This level I found to be less appealing. Idk why I didn't enjoy it as much, but it didn't appeal to me as much as ch2 or the prologue.


    Chapter 2: I LOVE THE MAZE. I gave the level 4.5 stars because I could see the time, effort, and the work you put into it. The magic teleportation distortion thing (lol) was great. I found it very cool to teleport around and opening doors. The Queen Indra fight wasn't that challenging but was a little weird, but nonetheless, fun. I really just loved the maze. Never seen someone make something on that scale. You should definitely get more plays and hearts for that level!

    I suggest everyone at least play chapter 2. The maze is the real key thing and is fun to play. You can see the effort in this level too.

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    Sounds like fun! I'll be playing those later today! (First, I gotta mow the lawn, dust the house, etc. )

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    don't you hate how life can get in the way evil death? i saw some posts i really want to reply to but i have to go apply for a job in about 15 minutes so I am gonna have to hold off sadly. hopefully it wont take long and i can come back to give them the attention.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Laharlsama View Post
    don't you hate how life can get in the way evil death? i saw some posts i really want to reply to but i have to go apply for a job in about 15 minutes so I am gonna have to hold off sadly. hopefully it wont take long and i can come back to give them the attention.
    Haha, yep. And in four days, I'll be gone for a week! Y'all can hopefully survive without me until the 27th, right?

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    aww but you seem fun. but if we have to go without you for that long lol

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