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Chaos Theatre: Nightmare of Trose


Rewrites suck. Rewrite of Prolouge and Chapter 1

Posted by Korcia Pramocia , 02 December 2012 · 482 views

So, I hated the way I wrote the prolouge and first chapter (and the other chapters for that matter) so I'm going to rewrite them. I've already rewritten the prolouge and first chapter, so here they are.

Prologue: Up to No Good

“ Alright, is everyone who needs to be here,...


Chapter 4 (Better late than never, right?)

Posted by Korcia Pramocia , 29 October 2012 · 406 views

Chapter 4: Problems

“ The tournament will begin again in three days!” the announcer shouted cheerily. When Dave and Mocha came back, Athena immediately teleported the whole group to the conference room they had been at before.

“What the hell, Mocha?” Athena asked. “Are you...


Chapter 3

Posted by Korcia Pramocia , 27 September 2012 · 255 views

Before reading, understand that there is use of a word that some may find offense as skill word and was therefore left uncensored. If you would like this changed, please contact me.

Chapter 3: Darkness Within

Mocha had been waiting for Staton to show up for almost five minutes. Just as...


Chapter 2

Posted by Korcia Pramocia , 25 September 2012 · 345 views

Chapter 2: Flesh Wound

The games will begin momentarily,” the announcer shouted merrily. “Please be patient, as the judges are going over the rules with the contestants!”

David and Mocha had been crammed into a small room with many other...


Prologue and Chapter 1

Posted by Korcia Pramocia , 24 September 2012 · 262 views

Prologue: Up to No Good

“I don't care what you say, Mocha!” Java shouted at her big sister. “There is no forgiveness for what they've done! You said it yourself: This world is bound together by the Gods, losing even one could bring it to an end...! Now that...

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