The Land of Loopy

Right so I have a series of questions, but they kind of stem off of each other.

1) Should Kane of gone bad?

If yes then:
- Should he end up good again or should the book end in a cliff hanger.

If no then:
- What should of happened out of the following;
- Spidey should have teleported there and Kane should have refused.
- Loopy never should of died and instead, had a change of heart - making her save them all. ...

Tainted Chapter 11


One Week Later


There were wanted posters everywhere. They were getting soaked in the rain so the ink ran until it was unreadable. London was completely empty. There were no cars on the roads, no drunks stumbling out of pubs. It felt like something out of Silent Hill. Everyone was in their houses. I laughed and looked at one of the posters. So I was wanted now was I? Lion must have called the number from that broadcast. Oh well, I ...

Tainted Chapter 10


They say it can take a single moment to change your life forever. Well it can also take a single moment to change your life back...

Makuta had sent me into Elsa’s world to send a message. That’s exactly what I intended to do. All I needed now was for the Prime Minister to leave his cosy little mansion. I ran my finger along the edge of my dagger and drew a thin line of blood. Wow it really was sharp. I was waiting in the Darkness, getting ...

Tainted Chapter 9


I was pinned to the floor. A hand made out of pure Darkness held me to the spot. I managed to lift myself onto my arms. I couldn’t move anymore than that though. I felt the hand begin to clench itself into a fist, giving me the illusion I was being crushed. I bit my lip and tried not to scream.
As the hand tightened, the Darkness seeped through my skin. As soon as it entered my blood stream I felt as though I was going to puke. I felt the icy-burning ...

Tainted Chapter 8

“Loopy!? How could you?” I felt really upset for some reason. It’s not like I knew her well.
“I don’t think she wants to speak to you Kane.” Makuta laughed.
“I don’t get why I’m here, if you were just going to do this again.” Nidihki growled.
“Just so I could kill you, having Kane do it just didn’t feel right. I want to be the one to see the light leave your eyes.” Makuta stepped forward. Now all we could see was his eyes and... The glint of ...